Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career. It is said: “A woman’s place is in the home.” What do you think?

It is a well-established fact that

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capable

of doing

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everything

that men do and

also

, they sacrifice

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a lot

for the well-being of their family, or for growth in their

career

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.

However

, even in

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case, some people state that a woman’s place is in the home. I completely disagree with

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idea. There are two principal reasons for

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I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that females are capable of

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doing the same kinds of jobs that men do. As an example, there have been a lot of

women

that managed to prove

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point throughout

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history.

As a result

, right now gender equality is way more

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,

moreover

,

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and

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people agree with the idea that

women

should not make a

career

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credibility to the statement brings to

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the majority of

women

like all people like being independent.

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a

career

can give them the independence that they want, and they would be able to make essential decisions by themselves without anyone’s interference. Turning to the other side of the argument it is possible that

while

pursuing a

career

women

can have less time for themselves and their

family

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. What I mean by

this

is that there is a huge probability that they will be too busy with their job and

career

growth, and

this

will lead to the fact that they will not be able to spend

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with their family and loved ones. In conclusion, by taking into account all the above-mentioned reasons, I once again reaffirm my position that everyone should have a choice of pursuing a

career

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if they want to.