The chart shows the average life expectancy for males and females in 1900, 1950 and 1990.

The chart shows the average life expectancy for males and females in 1900, 1950 and 1990.
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The diagram illustrates the number of average life expectancy for both men and women in five countries between 1900 and 1990.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the expectancy of life in both genders is getting higher throughout the period.
Moreover
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, it appears that the average life in female individuals is
more
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higher
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than male individuals.
To begin
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with, In 1990, Sweden came in first
place
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with 52.8 for men and 55.3 for women followed by
Denmark
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with 51.6 and 54.8. Belgium was in the third
place
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with 45.4 and 48.9.
Furthermore
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, Sweden and
Denmark
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in 1950 were seen to remain at the same
place
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with 69.9/68.9 for male citizens and 72.6/71.5 for female citizens.
However
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, Germany surpassed
Denmark
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and came in third
place
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with 64.6 and 68.5. Austria stayed at the
last
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place
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in the year 1900 and 1950.
Additionally
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, in 1990, Sweden was still unchanged, at first
place
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with 74.7 for men and 80.7 for women. Three countries comprising Germany, Belgium and Austria had almost the same number,
besides
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,
Denmark
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dropped to the final
place
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and ended at 72.6 and 78.8.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words place, denmark with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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