The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projections to 2040.

The line graph provided the percentage of the

population

of 4 different

countries

living in cities in Asia from 1970 to 2020, with

prediction

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to 2040.

Overall

, there was an increase in the

population

of all four

countries

, namely Indonesia, Thailand, Malaysia, and

Philippines

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the Philippines

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.

This

proportion is expected to continue to climb in the next 20

years

. In 1970, Indonesia was the country took the smallest percentage with 15%.

In addition

,

Philippines

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the Philippines

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took the biggest position with nearly 32%. During over 50

years

since

1970s

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the 1970s

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,

although

these

countries

have fluctuated changes, they will still rise in the next 20

years

.

However

, the proportion of the

population

of Indonesia in 1970 was the smallest but it will take the second place in 2040 by over 60%, with the first position

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Malaysia (almost 85%).

Besides

that, Thailand was

also

a nation

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a gradual climb during over 50

years

, from nearly 19% (in 1970) to 33% (in 2020). It will catch up

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with other

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countries

and take 50% of the

population

till

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2040.