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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line graph illustrates the total number of products that were transported by different modes of transport from 1974 to 2002 in the United Kingdom in
million
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tonnes
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, it can be seen from the chart the road was used more as compared to other methods.
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, the pipeline was
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 used by the transporters and the water method showed some increments during that period. In the case of road shipment which displays some movements over 25 years. It is conspicuous that the goods carried companies used the road system 70
million
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tonnes
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 in 1975 and it can be experienced with some fluctuations till 1990 after that it was plateaued at 80
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tonnes
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 from 1990 to 1994 and augmented gently in 2000 and touched 90
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tonnes
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, water was almost 40
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tonnes
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 in 1975
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 it was constant until 1973, after that, it experienced a lessen enhancement till 1982 and it strengthened slightly to reach 50
million
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tonnes
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 in 1997 and after that, it skyrocketed in 2000 and rose steadily to 61
million
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tonnes
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. Probing ahead, rail was not very popular during those years and it was 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 1975 after it was unchanged till 1973,
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 it started a downturned trajectory to 1986 and touched 50
million
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 and after that, it sight a slow swing till 1997 and touched at 40
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tonnes
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, it remained steady till 2000.
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, the pipeline method was used the least, which was 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1975 with a gentle growth till 1982 touched 23
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tonnes
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 it fell marginally till 1993 about 20
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 and after that, it was uniform till 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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