The charts give information about the proportions of boys and girls of a school who achieved high grades (A or B + ) in respective courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts show the changes in the percentages of
boys
and girls
gaining impressive grades in different subjects
in 1996 and 2000.
Humanities saw the biggest increase in the proportion
of high-achieving boys
, with the figure nearly doubling to 43% or so. By comparison
, the figure for girls
dropped by 8% to 25%. Similar changes happened to the arts, in which the percentage of boys
who gained high scores increased significantly to 21% and the figure for girls
decreased slightly to 25%. Languages were another course which experienced a drop in the percentage of high-achieving girls
, down to 31%, and the proportion
of high-achievers for boys
remained unchanged at about 21% in this
course.
There were similar patterns in the performance in science and maths for both genders. Around one third
of Add a hyphen
one-third
boys
gained satisfying grades in these science courses in
1996-higher than the figures for other Change preposition
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subjects-but
only around 18% and 17% reached Correct your spelling
subjects
this
level in 2000. In contrast
, the proportion
of high-achieving girls
in these two courses increased to 11% and 15% respectively, although
these figures were still far lower than those for the other three subjects
.
Overall
, there were clear gender differences in all these five subjects
: science subjects
saw an improvement in the performance of girls
, while
the arts and humanities had a higher proportion
of high-performing boys
. In 2000, boys
outperformed girls
in every subject except the arts.Submitted by 876764430 on
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