The bar graph
as well as
a line graph provides information about how many men and women played games from 1924 until 2012.
In overview, both males and females constantly increased from the beginning up to the end of the period, Linking Words
however
, men were more compared to the ladies.
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To begin
with, in 1924, the gentlemen Linking Words
participated
were about 3000 whilst women were only less than even 200, meanwhile, Correct pronoun usage
who participated
Add an article
the male
male
always qualified for Fix the agreement mistake
males
such
Olympics.Linking Words
Additionally
, in 1952, both numbers rose which means that girls were around 500 Linking Words
while
boys reached approximately 4500, as time went on, in 1984, males were above 5000 compared to females which was almost at 1500.
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Moreover
, in the final year of 2012, there was a huge rise of women from about 1500 up to 4800, Linking Words
this
clearly shows that mothers were Linking Words
passionate
about participating in game competitions than before.Correct quantifier usage
more passionate
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Lastly
the number of players Add a comma
Lastly,
were
growing stead from 1924 up to 1984, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
however
, from there onwards, they experienced a rapid rise until 2012.Linking Words
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