Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding that Linking Words
i
have taken Change the capitalization
I
cookery
Correct article usage
a cookery
course
I really Use synonyms
apreciate
it. I hope Correct your spelling
appreciate
this
letter finds you in great health and you are doing well there.
First of all, I am going to explain that I really enjoyed Linking Words
with
the Change preposition
apply
course
facilities the Use synonyms
kithcen
tools Correct your spelling
kitchen
is
very good. Change the verb form
are
In addition
, there Linking Words
have
sophisticated goods it is really assist participants Verb problem
are
to
fast Change preposition
in
understand
Wrong verb form
understanding
about
the material. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, the Linking Words
instructures
have great Correct your spelling
instructors
in structures
qualification
Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
hence
it Linking Words
useful
to enhance the Add a missing verb
is useful
pupils
Change to a genitive case
pupil's
pupils'
ability
.
Fix the agreement mistake
abilities
secondly
, Linking Words
along with
Linking Words
this
letter I would inform you that I have done two main Linking Words
Use synonyms
course
the one is Asian culinary Change to a plural noun
courses
it
was Correct pronoun usage
which
teaching
by Wrong verb form
taught
chef
Vievian. Capitalize word
Chef
Furthermore
, I have done Arabian meals by Linking Words
chef
Abdul, I Capitalize word
Chef
can catch
a lot of experience from them Verb problem
gained
such
as how to Linking Words
efficient
at work and how important to keep Add a missing verb
be efficient
Correct article usage
the trusted
trusted
Replace the word
trust
from
the Change preposition
of
costumer
.
Correct your spelling
customers
Therefore
, in the next summer Linking Words
holiday
I want to take Add a comma
holiday,
Correct article usage
an italian
italian
food Change the capitalization
Italian
course
to develop my Use synonyms
knowlege
Correct your spelling
knowledge
about
Change preposition
of
european
Change the capitalization
European
culinary
.
Replace the word
cuisine
Thanks
you for your nice attention, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regard,
Mr.Bian.Replace the word
Thank
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