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The pie charts below show the form of transportation to work normally used by workers in a particular city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the form of transportation to work normally used by workers in a particular city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie chart presents the
percentege
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percentage
 of
transport
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using
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used
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 by people in 2005
ana
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and
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 2015 to
went
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 to
the
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apply
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work. In 2005 the most popular
transport
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 was
car
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a car
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 (50%), the second
transport
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 of popularity was
carpool
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carpooling
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 (25%) and 2 of 6 types of
transport
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 have only 5% it was
bicyle
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bicycle
 and travel on
feet
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foot
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. In 2015 again the most popular
transport
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is
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was
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car
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the car
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 (35%),the second
transport
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s
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was
 carpool(20%), and the same percentage
have
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were
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 people
worf
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working
 at home
ant
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and
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 bus users. In conclusion, I can say that after 10 years the number of people choosing one or another type of
transport
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 has diversified slightly, and in my
opinion
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opinion,
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this
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 depends on the fact that more opportunities and types of professions have appeared.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words transport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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