The pie charts below show the form of transportation to work normally used by workers in a particular city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie chart presents the

percentege

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percentage

transport

using

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used

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by people in 2005

ana

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and

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2015 to

went

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the

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apply

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work. In 2005 the most popular

transport

was

car

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a car

the car

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(50%), the second

transport

of popularity was

carpool

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carpooling

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(25%) and 2 of 6 types of

transport

have only 5% it was

bicyle

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bicycle

and travel on

feet

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foot

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. In 2015 again the most popular

transport

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was

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car

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the car

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(35%),the second

transport

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was

carpool(20%), and the same percentage

have

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were

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people

worf

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working

at home

ant

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and

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bus users. In conclusion, I can say that after 10 years the number of people choosing one or another type of

transport

has diversified slightly, and in my

opinion

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opinion,

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this

depends on the fact that more opportunities and types of professions have appeared.

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