The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrades-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables show some details about the number of
sales
coffee
and bananas between 1999 and 2004 in five countries. Switzerland experienced the most increase in bananas sold Change preposition
of coffee
by
15 Change preposition
apply
million
in 1999 and 47 million
in 2004 also
the biggest amount of coffee
sold in Switzerland 3 million
and 6 million
in this
two years.
The number Correct determiner usage
these
coffee
Change preposition
of coffee
sales
in
1999 to 2004 in the Change preposition
from
Uk
Correct your spelling
UK
shoot
by 1.5 to 20 Replace the word
shot
million
which is the higher
range of Correct word choice
highest
sales
, after that bnanas in Belgium with 0.6 to 4 million
was the biggest amount. The littlest number of sales
in both of this product
was for Fix the agreement mistake
these products
coffee
in Sweden with 0.8 to 1 million
,also
in the UK the coffee
sold by 1 to 5.5 million
.
Approximately the sales
of this
products Correct determiner usage
these
has
increased Change the verb form
have
insted
of some of them which are Sweden and Denmark in bananas followed by 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9.Correct your spelling
instead
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