The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrades-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrades-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables show some details about the number of
sales
coffee
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of coffee
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and bananas between 1999 and 2004 in five countries. Switzerland experienced the most increase in bananas sold
by
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15
million
in 1999 and 47
million
in 2004
also
the biggest amount of
coffee
sold in Switzerland 3
million
and 6
million
in
this
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these
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two years. The number
coffee
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of coffee
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sales
in
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from
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1999 to 2004 in the
Uk
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UK
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shoot
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by 1.5 to 20
million
which is the
higher
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highest
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range of
sales
, after that bnanas in Belgium with 0.6 to 4
million
was the biggest amount. The littlest number of
sales
in both of
this product
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these products
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was for
coffee
in Sweden with 0.8 to 1
million
,
also
in the UK the
coffee
sold by 1 to 5.5
million
. Approximately the
sales
of
this
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these
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products
has
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increased
insted
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instead
of some of them which are Sweden and Denmark in bananas followed by 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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