The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the online
sales
of the commerce industry in Canada between 2005 and 2010 of four types of products electronics & appliances,
food
& Beverage, home furnishings and video games.
Overall
, the majority of product
sales
increased in a five-year period only home furnishings products clients did not show more interest. Customers attracted towards
food
and beverages department, it shows a huge growth. It is conspicuous that in the year 2005, customers used web services to purchase
food
and beverages, which increased abruptly one-tenth from 22% to 32% in a five-year period (2010). It was the highest growth of the
food
business which boosted the hospitality industry.
In addition
, customers who played video games
sales
were 18% in 2005 increased to 23% with an increment of 5% of the
sales
in 2010. Probing ahead, it can be seen plummet about 5% of electronics and appliances, 18% were sold in 2005, which declined to nearly one-third of the total
sales
. Buyers did not boost
sales
of electronic and appliance products.
Furthermore
, online shoppers did not show confidence to buy online household and furnishing goods,
as a result
, the
sales
plunged 25% to 15% with a huge gap.
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