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The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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Presented for observation are two different maps highlighting the changes that have taken place
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 the ground floor of a library between the years 2001 and 2009.
Overall
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, the floor has undergone a visible transition including the addition of several types of
books
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 and the appearance of technological devices.
However
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, the southern section of
this
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 library remained unchanged. In 2001, there were four main kinds of
books
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 fiction, history, self-help, and newspaper & periodicals. It has a large space that was not used in all acreage of the floor.
Tables
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 are arranged disjointed and far apart.
By contrast
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, in 2009, the library added more types of
books
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 for the consumption of customers
such
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 as kitchen, economics and law.
Besides
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, all square
tables
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 have been removed by rectangle
tables
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 and the area for fictional
books
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 was used for more
tables
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. After redeveloped, there was built children's places and computers .
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, the location of the stairs, the librarian's desk and the entrance have remained the same.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, tables with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-service machines
  • computer stations
  • digital resources
  • book sections
  • fiction, non-fiction, reference
  • café area
  • repositioned
  • user preferences
  • management strategies
  • children's area
  • youth engagement
  • educational activities
  • meeting rooms
  • collaborative spaces
  • community events
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