The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.
The line graph gives information about how much five different
food
were consumed in Australia from 1950 to 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
foods
Overall
, it is clear that
vegetables, fruit, bread and seafood experienced increase
, Add an article
an increase
while
meat decreased during the period of time.
The figure showed that in 1950 vegetables was
the most consumed food at 140 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
kg
per individual during the year. This
number then
fell moderately to 120 kg
in 1970 before went
up to 140 Wrong verb form
going
kg
in 1980. After that, it dropped again to 120 kg
before rose
significantly to 160 Wrong verb form
rising
kg
in 2010, became
the highest compared to other categories. Wrong verb form
becoming
Likewise
, fruit
experienced Add an article
the fruit
considerable
increase from 80 Add an article
a considerable
kg
in the initial year to 140 kg
in 2010.
Another interesting data
is Correct quantifier usage
piece of data
bread
that started at 40 Add an article
the bread
kg
in 1950 and then
rose to the
peak at around 65 Correct article usage
a
kg
in 1970 before having considerable fell
to 60 Replace the word
fall
in
the end of the period of time. Seafood was the lowest in 1950 at 20 Change the preposition
at
kg
and increased slightly for the next 60 years to just about 22 kg
in 2010. Meat, on the other hand
, experienced Correct article usage
a decreased
decreased
from roughly 110 Replace the word
decrease
kg
in 1950. Although
went up to 118 kg
in 1990, this
figure then
went down to 80 kg
in
the end of the period of time.Change the preposition
at
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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