The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.
The line graph gives information about how much five different
food
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foods
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were consumed in Australia from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
vegetables, fruit, bread and seafood experienced
increase
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an increase
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,
while
meat decreased during the period of time. The figure showed that in 1950 vegetables
was
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were
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the most consumed food at 140
kg
per individual during the year.
This
number
then
fell moderately to 120
kg
in 1970 before
went
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going
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up to 140
kg
in 1980. After that, it dropped again to 120
kg
before
rose
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significantly to 160
kg
in 2010,
became
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becoming
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the highest compared to other categories.
Likewise
,
fruit
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the fruit
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experienced
considerable
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a considerable
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increase from 80
kg
in the initial year to 140
kg
in 2010. Another interesting
data
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is
bread
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the bread
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that started at 40
kg
in 1950 and
then
rose to
the
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peak at around 65
kg
in 1970 before having considerable
fell
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to 60
in
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the end of the period of time. Seafood was the lowest in 1950 at 20
kg
and increased slightly for the next 60 years to just about 22
kg
in 2010. Meat,
on the other hand
, experienced
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a decreased
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decreased
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from roughly 110
kg
in 1950.
Although
went up to 118
kg
in 1990,
this
figure
then
went down to 80
kg
in
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at
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the end of the period of time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kg with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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