The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
sales
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of three frequently bought foods, namely,
bread
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,
buns
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and pies in a bakery in 2014.
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,
it is clear that
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the popularity of buying
bread
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and pies among people has increased,
whereas
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, the demand for
buns
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have
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reduced. Customers spent money the most
for
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on
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buying
bread
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. At the beginning of the year, the
sales
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of
bread
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were the highest, with around $80,000.
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, the interest in buying
bread
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faced a gradual decline from around February,
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after
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sales
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fluctuated till September.
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was the time were people grew interest to buy
buns
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, increasing its
sales
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to around $70,000 from $40,000 at the start of 2014. A progressive rise in the
sales
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of
bread
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was seen between September and December, and
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sales
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rose back to the same level as in January. At the same time, the
sales
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of
buns
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plummeted down to $30,000 by December, making it the
least bought
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item by the end of the year. The
sales
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of pies started only at $10,000, making it the least popular food in January. It faced a gradual rise throughout the year, making it the second most popular food in December with a sale of $40,000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, bread, buns with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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