Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged . Others believe that children who taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that it is necessary to support the sense of competition in young
children
, and some believe that cooperation, working as a team, should be formed more.
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aged 7 and 8 years. It has both good and bad sides. Use synonyms
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who is used to living with a lot of competition may change his mind when communicating with others. Use synonyms
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if he works more cooperatively. Use synonyms
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, I think that parents should teach their Linking Words
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to be polite and to communicate with strangers from a young age.
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