Social
media
is a controversial topic worldwide.
This
author opines that social
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liveCorrect your spelling
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facebookCapitalize word
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or Twitter affect significantly to a negative side on young
and their
to create personal relationships
due to
people
always
dependWrong verb form
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on
media
and
likelyAdd a missing verb
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to
some
postFix the agreement mistake
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about negative things to get
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viewWrong verb form
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more.
However
, some
people
think that
media
can help
people
get closer in a positive way.
It must be recognized that
people
take
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social
media
for granted. The reason is the development of society so everyone
all hadWrong verb form
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Add an article
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smartphoneFix the agreement mistake
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to relax and upload
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eventFix the agreement mistake
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whatCorrect word choice
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areChange the verb form
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happening in the world.
Moreover
,
become Verb problem
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more and more
people
using the internet so some bad intended
people
abusedWrong verb form
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it to rob money or leak their personal information. For that reason, social
media
will be a good tool for bad
people
who have
some Correct quantifier usage
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bad ideas.
Then
, social
networkFix the agreement mistake
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become more and more toxic.
Nevertheless
, others believe that social
media
can help
people
get closer in a good way. The belief is based on social
media
likeChange preposition
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a tool to help youths who
livedWrong verb form
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far away
homeChange preposition
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can Verb problem
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connect with family and friends
the
media
by calling or chatting online.
This
point may be true, but they just did it for a few days
then
they felt bored with calling home because they are addicted to entertainment on
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social
media
. From that, the relationships had a big distance from them to relative
people
.
The writers
believesChange the verb form
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that if
people
used the online platforms a lot, they would be
.
Then
, they lead to the lack of authentic interaction among beings.
For example
, if there were an accident on the road or someone met
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,
people
who are addicted to the online website and
wantedWrong verb form
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to gain more views to be popular
instead
of helping them,
they Correct pronoun usage
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would take pictures or record videos and upload
onCorrect pronoun usage
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the social sites.
That is
a negative face of
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society and
makeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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a distance between
people
and
people
.
In conclusion, social
media
hatCorrect your spelling
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both advantages and disadvantages but in
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modern society, young
people
hadWrong verb form
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a lot of
pressuresFix the agreement mistake
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so they always use phones
likeChange preposition
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a trend. For that, it may create a negative side and cannot form
a Correct the article-noun agreement
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good relationships or
behaviorsChange the spelling
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.