The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The change
of
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in
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the school from 1985 to now is
showed
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shown
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in two maps
Overall
, the most striking change is that the bough of a 3
junction
which
connect
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connects
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to the playground was removed.
Similarly
, one of the
part
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parts
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of
playing
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the playing
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fields
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field
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was
flattend
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flattened
. Meanwhile, the car park which is surrounded by a 3
junction
and the office in the left-hand
corner
of parking zone
were
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was
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remainded
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remained
unchanged.
Initially
, one of the
branch
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branches
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of the 3
junction
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junctions
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which
connect
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connects
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to the playing areas was
destroy
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destroyed
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to make way for the green.
Then
, the
extant
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extent
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of the road was rounded as a half
of
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apply
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circle which
link
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linked
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the entrance and exit.
Additionally
, the classroom block in
right-hand
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the right-hand
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corner
of
a
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the
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school which
have
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has
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2 floors, was updated to 3 floors. The car park and the classrooms in the right-hand
corner
of the library in 1985 were demolished and become
a blank areas
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a blank area
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until now.
However
, the car park which is surrounded by the road and the office on the left-hand
corner
of
a
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the
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campus
were
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have been
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kept untouched until now. Moving
onto
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apply
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one of the
part
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parts
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of playing fields which connect to the 3
junction
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junctions
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in 1985, was
flattend
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flattened
to make room for two classrooms
which
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apply
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on the right and
left hand
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left-hand
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corner
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corners
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respectively.
Besides
, the swimming pool and fitness centre above a
claaassrooms
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classroom
classrooms
which is on the bottom left-hand side
,
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apply
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was added. The library in the left-hand
corner
in 1985 was
narrowd
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narrow
down and added the computer room. After the reconstruction, the limit of students was increased from 1500 to 2300 people.
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