The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The change
of
the school from 1985 to now is Change preposition
in
showed
in two maps
Change the form of the verb
shown
Overall
, the most striking change is that the bough of a 3 junction
which connect
to the playground was removed. Change the verb form
connects
Similarly
, one of the part
of Change to a plural noun
parts
playing
Correct article usage
the playing
fields
was Fix the agreement mistake
field
flattend
. Meanwhile, the car park which is surrounded by a 3 Correct your spelling
flattened
junction
and the office in the left-hand corner
of parking zone were
Change the verb form
was
remainded
unchanged.
Correct your spelling
remained
Initially
, one of the branch
of the 3 Change to a plural noun
branches
junction
which Change to a plural noun
junctions
connect
to the playing areas was Change the verb form
connects
destroy
to make way for the green. Wrong verb form
destroyed
Then
, the extant
of the road was rounded as a half Correct your spelling
extent
of
circle which Change preposition
apply
link
the entrance and exit. Wrong verb form
linked
Additionally
, the classroom block in right-hand
Add an article
the right-hand
corner
of a
school which Correct article usage
the
have
2 floors, was updated to 3 floors. The car park and the classrooms in the right-hand Correct subject-verb agreement
has
corner
of the library in 1985 were demolished and become a blank areas
until now. Correct the article-noun agreement
a blank area
blank areas
However
, the car park which is surrounded by the road and the office on the left-hand corner
of a
campus Correct article usage
the
were
kept untouched until now.
Moving Wrong verb form
have been
onto
one of the Change preposition
apply
part
of playing fields which connect to the 3 Change to a plural noun
parts
junction
in 1985, was Change to a plural noun
junctions
flattend
to make room for two classrooms Correct your spelling
flattened
which
on the right and Correct pronoun usage
apply
left hand
Add a hyphen
left-hand
corner
respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
corners
Besides
, the swimming pool and fitness centre above a claaassrooms
which is on the bottom left-hand sideCorrect your spelling
classroom
classrooms
,
was added. The library in the left-hand Remove the comma
apply
corner
in 1985 was narrowd
down and added the computer room. After the reconstruction, the limit of students was increased from 1500 to 2300 people.Correct your spelling
narrow
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words junction, corner with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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