The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The coastal
area
known as Darwin is depicted in two maps showing significant changes between 2009 and 2014. Generally, the most notable transformation is the complete replacement of the factory district in the town's
center
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with green trees. Meanwhile, the facilities around the lake have mostly remained the same.
Initially
, the industrial zone to the right of the lake was demolished to make way for a swimming pool.
In contrast
, the school and convention
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to the north stayed unchanged, as did the fishing
area
over the five-year period. Moving to the
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of the shoreline, a significant change was the demolition of a portion of the manufacturing
area
and the construction of residential buildings in close proximity to the old ones. The
area
to the right of the residential buildings was replaced with a campus.
Furthermore
, the southern
area
, once an industrial field, was converted into vegetation. A new street for pedestrians was built across
this
green space, connecting to the
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on the sea.
However
, the two swimming pools to the west of the coast remained unchanged until 2014.
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