The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992
The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of employment patterns for both male and female citizens in the UK in the year 1992.
Overall
, it is clear that
women in the United Kingdom apply to clerical jobs while
most male individuals work in the management field. Moreover
, people in England are not interested in becoming labourers.
To begin
with, women in Great Britain were intrigued by a clerical and related job, occupied 31% followed by profession and craft with 29% and 27% respectively. Other manual employments, which registered at 3%, were less than other non-manuals by three times. Furthermore
, female workers in general labour had only 1%.
Additionally
, men in the UK more than one-third were employed in managerial and professional jobs. On the contrary
, craft in male gender had a fraction as same as in other manuals and represented 26% and 24%. Both religious related
and other non-manuals were at 6% Add a hyphen
religious-related
besides
, general labourers in men accounted for 2%.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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