The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages.

The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages.
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The provided two bar charts illustrate the percentage of 14 to 16-year-old students who study a contemporary global language in an English-speaking nation and the three most common other languages.between1984 and 2007. These other languages are categorized as French, German, and Spanish. Looking at an
overall
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perspective, it is apparent that girls dominate boys in the ratio of students studying an international language.
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, French is still in the highest position among other categories during the given period.
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with, the contribution in the ratio of individual students who studied in another language experienced a downward trend from 1984 to 2007. The girl’s proportion started at nearly 50% and decreased to 40%. Meanwhile, the proportion of boys fell from 5% of the initial percentage to 25% in the
last
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year. Turning to the top three famous foreign data,
French
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and
German
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Germany
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declined during the same time frame except for Spanish. Both began at 50% and 20% declined to 25% and 15% respectively.
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, Spanish rose five-fold to 10% in the
last
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period shown.
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