Walking is known to be beneficial for health but these days the number of people walking has reduced a lot. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this situation?

Walking is believed to be advantageous for

health

,

nevertheless

, there is a decreasing number of

people

walking nowadays.

This

is because

in

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modern society,

people

prefer

to

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surfing

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the internet and

using

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high-tech tools to improve their

health

instead

of walking. To deal with

this

phenomenon, the authorities should propagate more about the drawbacks of not walking regularly and encourage residents to use walking

machines

. Some

people

have an unchanged thought that walking takes a lot of their time and makes them feel tired.

And

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this

situation

consequently

appears in hard weather.

For instance

, sitting in a room with

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air-conditioner and surfing the internet is much better than going outside in hot weather for a walk,

this

is a common thought in some

peple

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people

. Not

also

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some individuals but

also

the

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whole families agree with

this

idea and have no change in their

children

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thoughts,

therefore

there have been more and more

people

who are not into walking. And

this

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problems can lead to many

health

diseases

such

as cardio

vescular

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vascular

vesicular

or leg problems. Because of the bad

consequence

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for

health

, the authorities should give more methods to cope with matters. Walking

machines

would be the best

solutions

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for those who are interested

to do

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things

indoor

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indoors

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. The walking

machines

which

is

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connected to the electricity have no limit

in

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time

using

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and power,

thus

, it is

easiear

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easier

for the whole family to do exercise

as well as

walking

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at home.

Furthermore

, the authorities should

spead

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spread

out

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more encouragement for the residents to walk because of its bad influence

to

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health

.

For instance

, advertising the drawbacks of sitting too much or not doing exercise on a wide range of social platforms can help

people

realize the importance of walking and

then

they can have their own methods to solve

this

problem.

To sum up

, walking plays an enormous role in

health

,

hence

, governments should give more motivation for residents to walk more and

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new walking

machines

at home.