Walking is known to be beneficial for health but these days the number of people walking has reduced a lot. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this situation?
Walking is believed to be advantageous for
health
, nevertheless
, there is a decreasing number of people
walking nowadays. This
is because in
modern society, Add the comma(s)
, in
people
prefer to
Change preposition
apply
surfing
the internet and Change the verb
surf
using
high-tech tools to improve their Wrong verb form
use
health
instead
of walking. To deal with this
phenomenon, the authorities should propagate more about the drawbacks of not walking regularly and encourage residents to use walking machines
.
Some people
have an unchanged thought that walking takes a lot of their time and makes them feel tired. And
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This
this
situation consequently
appears in hard weather. For instance
, sitting in a room with a
air-conditioner and surfing the internet is much better than going outside in hot weather for a walk, Change the article
an
this
is a common thought in some peple
. Not Correct your spelling
people
also
some individuals but Rephrase
only
also
the
whole families agree with Correct article usage
apply
this
idea and have no change in their children
thoughts, Change noun form
children's
therefore
there have been more and more people
who are not into walking. And this
problems can lead to many Correct determiner usage
these
health
diseases such
as cardio vescular
or leg problems.
Because of the bad Correct your spelling
vascular
vesicular
consequence
for Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
health
, the authorities should give more methods to cope with matters. Walking machines
would be the best solutions
for those who are interested Fix the agreement mistake
solution
to do
things Change preposition
in doing
indoor
. The walking Correct your spelling
indoors
machines
which is
connected to the electricity have no limit Change the verb form
are
in
time Change preposition
on
using
and power, Replace the word
use
thus
, it is easiear
for the whole family to do exercise Correct your spelling
easier
as well as
walking
at home. Wrong verb form
walk
Furthermore
, the authorities should spead
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spread
out
more encouragement for the residents to walk because of its bad influence Change preposition
apply
to
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on
health
. For instance
, advertising the drawbacks of sitting too much or not doing exercise on a wide range of social platforms can help people
realize the importance of walking and then
they can have their own methods to solve this
problem.
To sum up
, walking plays an enormous role in health
, hence
, governments should give more motivation for residents to walk more and introducing
new walking Wrong verb form
introduce
machines
at home.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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