The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The three pie charts illustrate how much
food
was consumed in the world
in 2008 and the comparison with China
and India
.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that processed food
dominated consumption
whether in the world
, China
, or India
. Furthermore
, there were other three kinds of food
(vegetables and fruits, animal food
, and nuts and seeds) that also
contributed to the world
's and nation's consumption
.
In terms of the most consumed food
, processed food
accounted for 41% of the world
's consumption
. Meanwhile, in China
and India
, the consumption
made up 34% and 39%, respectively.
Regarding the other kind of food
, vegetables and fruits were the top two after the processed food
. In the world
, the proportion hit 29%. However
, the category gained 32% in China
, while
in India
, the percentage reached 23%. For the animal food
category, the consumption
stood at 26% in the world
, 15% in China
, and 27% in India
. Moreover
, for nuts and seeds, the percentage was pretty small only 4% in the world
. Even so, the number got higher percentage in China
and India
.Submitted by mmmuuu on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, world, china, india, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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