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The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The three pie charts illustrate how much
food
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 was consumed in the
world
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 in 2008 and the comparison with
China
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 and
India
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.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that processed
food
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 dominated
consumption
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 whether in the
world
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,
China
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, or
India
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.
Furthermore
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, there were other three kinds of
food
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 (vegetables and fruits, animal
food
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, and nuts and seeds) that
also
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 contributed to the
world
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's and nation's
consumption
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. In terms of the most consumed
food
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, processed
food
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 accounted for 41% of the
world
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's
consumption
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. Meanwhile, in
China
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 and
India
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, the
consumption
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 made up 34% and 39%, respectively. Regarding the other kind of
food
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, vegetables and fruits were the top two after the processed
food
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. In the
world
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, the proportion hit 29%.
However
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, the category gained 32% in
China
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,
while
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 in
India
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, the percentage reached 23%. For the animal
food
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 category, the
consumption
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 stood at 26% in the
world
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, 15% in
China
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, and 27% in
India
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.
Moreover
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, for nuts and seeds, the percentage was pretty small only 4% in the
world
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. Even so, the number got higher percentage in
China
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 and
India
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, world, china, india, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • average consumption
  • worldwide
  • data
  • comparison
  • differences
  • similarities
  • food items
  • categories
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • majority
  • minority
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