Topic: The graph below shows the number of students from the US, the UK and Australia who studied in universities in other countries from 2002 to 2007.

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graph illustrates how many pupils from three different countries studied abroad at foreign universities from 2002 till 2007.

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graph includes US, UK and Australia, and the trend

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American

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was upward

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the English one was downward.

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had not had any changes during

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period. The noticeable change occurred in the UK’s pupils, and it started from 30000 in 2002 and ended to approximately 20100 in the

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year.

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, the decline had happened in 2003 and it had continued until 2007.

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the graph, the population of American students were 50000 and 48000 in 2002 and 2003 respectively.

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came back to 50000 again in 2006

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and remained flat till 2007.

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, the population of Australia had steadily passed from 2002 till 2007 and the numbers of them were exactly 10000 during these years. (150 words)