Topic: The graph below shows the number of students from the US, the UK and Australia who studied in universities in other countries from 2002 to 2007.

Topic: The graph below shows the number of students from the US, the UK and Australia who studied in universities in other countries from 2002 to 2007.
The given
line
graph illustrates how many pupils from three different countries studied abroad at foreign universities from 2002 till 2007.
Overall
,
this
line
graph includes US, UK and Australia, and the trend
of
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American
student
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students
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was upward
while
the English one was downward.
Moreover
, the
Australian’s
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line
had not had any changes during
this
period. The noticeable change occurred in the UK’s pupils, and it started from 30000 in 2002 and ended to approximately 20100 in the
last
year.
Furthermore
, the decline had happened in 2003 and it had continued until 2007.
According to
the graph, the population of American students were 50000 and 48000 in 2002 and 2003 respectively.
In addition
,
this
line
came back to 50000 again in 2006
,
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and remained flat till 2007.
Additionally
, the population of Australia had steadily passed from 2002 till 2007 and the numbers of them were exactly 10000 during these years. (150 words)
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