Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are bet or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views on whether focusing on only certain subjects

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positive or negative effects on

teenagers

. There are many benefits

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this

issue,

while

there are

also

drawbacks that we have to consider on

besides

as well.

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essay will discuss

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issue and suggest my view on the matter On the one hand, there are some grounds to support

this

view that youth have better to concentrate on the subjects that they feel excited

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To begin

with, when

teenagers

focus on specific studies they can prevent their interest in learning. In fact, if schools force all

materials

on

children

, many students would be uninteresting easily in their whole

study

.

For instance

,

this

phenomenon can lead to choosing

children

's major that they want to

study

at the university.

Therefore

,

teenagers

should be supported to

study

their interesting

materials

.

On the other hand

, others suggest that students should

study

all subjects.

Firstly

, each subject has a different lesson that students can acquire. In general,

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of education will bring

approach

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that a variety of subject interests.

According to

some academic research, focusing on specific

materials

cannot develop

children

's knowledge of broad

study

.

Moreover

, as society has rapidly

transitioning

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to

modern

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the modern

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era, many companies require diverse

ablities

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abilities

for their work to young employees.

Hence

, learning all

materials

might be better to help

teenagaers

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teenagers

for future

occupation's

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quality. In conclusion, It is not

clear-cut

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a clear-cut

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issue.

However

, I am of the opinion that

teenagers

should

study

all

subject

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. Despite of threat of tedious that

children

can get, it will bring better results to

children

for a long period.