The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
The charts delineate information about the
price
of
tickets
for both directions on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne which are 2 cities belonging to Australia, over the period of 2 weeks in 2013. Looking from an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
the
price
of airline
tickets
at the weekend almost experienced a downward trend.
While
the
cost
of airfare on Monday and
Friday
was the highest, On
Tuesday
, Wednesday and
Thursday
the
price
was the lowest. There was a dramatic decrease in the
price
of aeroplane
tickets
on Monday for Sydney to Melbourne flights, from 80
dollars
in
week
1 and fell to 50
dollars
in
week
2. From
Tuesday
to
Thursday
, the
cost
of airfare stayed constant and went up considerably on
Friday
(beginning at 40
dollars
and ending at around 75
dollars
). Over the weekend of 2 weeks, the
price
registered a downward trend (from about 70
dollars
to 50
dollars
). In comparison with the money paid for aeroplane
tickets
of the reserve route on
week
1, which was 60
dollars
, the
price
on Monday of
week
2 was significantly down to 40
dollars
.
Whereas
the
cost
from
Tuesday
to
Thursday
remained steady (approximately 35
dollars
), the
price
on
Friday
soared sharply and fell slightly on Saturday and Sunday in
week
1 (80
dollars
became 60
dollars
) . In
week
2 the
cost
of flight
tickets
stayed stable on
Tuesday
to
Thursday
and grew gradually on
Friday
(from around 35
dollars
to 60
dollars
).
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