The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates two possible areas, namely S1 and S2, for the construction

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of a

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shopping mall in

the

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apply

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Brandfield

City

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. Looking at the

overall

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perspective, it can be seen that both locations are near

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city

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the city

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centre.

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, there is a railway and the road running

though

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through

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the

city

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uniformly. To start with, the S1 is situated between the downtown and the Housing estate in the northern part. In comparison, S1 is much closer to the river which passes from the southwest to the north than S2. There is

also

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a railway above the S1 and the road to the west, which makes it more

accessable

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accessible

for visitors to get there.

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, facilities

such

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as the Golf course and park

located

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in the west of the

city

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. In comparison, S2 is situated between the main road and the railway, just under the Industrial estate.

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, it is remote from the river

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other recreation zones.

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, getting here would be challenging for the residents

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the undeveloped transportation system.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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shopping mall
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congestion
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environmental considerations
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consumer behavior
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