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The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates two possible areas, namely S1 and S2, for the construction
a
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of a
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shopping mall in
the
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apply
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Brandfield
City
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. Looking at the
overall
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 perspective, it can be seen that both locations are near
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city
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the city
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 centre.
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, there is a railway and the road running
though
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through
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 the
city
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 uniformly. To start with, the S1 is situated between the downtown and the Housing estate in the northern part. In comparison, S1 is much closer to the river which passes from the southwest to the north than S2. There is
also
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 a railway above the S1 and the road to the west, which makes it more
accessable
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accessible
 for visitors to get there.
In addition
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, facilities
such
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 as the Golf course and park
located
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are located
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 in the west of the
city
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. In comparison, S2 is situated between the main road and the railway, just under the Industrial estate.
However
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, it is remote from the river
as well as
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 other recreation zones.
Therefore
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, getting here would be challenging for the residents
due to
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 the undeveloped transportation system.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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