The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip from 2010 to 2015.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip from 2010 to 2015.
Contained in the two maps is information pertaining to changes that took place in the heart of the small village between 2010 and 2015. Generally speaking, a noticeable transformation has been made including the construction of new residential and commercial amenities.
Additionally
, transportation hubs have been modernized and added. Beginning with the north-western quadrant of the suburb, as far as shops alongside the main
road
were concerned, they were converted into a newly constructed shopping
center
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located between a new bus station and car park.
In addition
, the main
road
was relocated to make the semi-circular surrounding the newly developed zone. In the proximity of the car park, there was a new accommodation for residents at the north-easterly point of the map, leading to the erection of a small
road
connecting to the main street. Just between the remaining shops’ area and newly constructed land, a small street for only pedestrians was added. Moving to the south-eastern quarter of the town, the park was reduced to a smaller size to make way for the construction of the main
road
linking to the existing
road
on the other side, motivating the opening of a dual carriageway. Adjacent to the parking lot, a new residential zone was built,
while
the previous housing estate was relocated, alleviated in size, and separated by the new
road
. In the most south-westerly point of the suburb, the school has been enlarged.
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