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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two maps which have been provided for
further
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 investigation, where the first picture shows an
island
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 in
original
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its original
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 position and
second
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the second
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 one presents a constructed territory of the same
island
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 after tourism sector improvement. As a matter of fact, it is essential to note that approximately a whole area of the
island
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 has been industrialised.
Firstly
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, as it can be observed, there were
initially
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 just a few palms in the territory of the
island
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.
Consequently
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, nobody
have
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has
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 lived there before. After improvement and tourist’s arrival to the
island
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, there are a lot of facilities, which is available for new visitors. So,
a
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apply
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reception is located in the
center
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centre
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 of the
island
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, surrounded from both left and right sides by
accommodation
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the accommodation
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 area where tourists live.
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, if come down from the reception, a pierce might be found with two sails in the seawater.
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, a restaurant is situated behind the reception with a pleasant view
to
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of
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a
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the
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 sea.
Overall
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,
according to
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 the presented pictures, it is obviously essential to note that tourist activities
in
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on
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 the
island
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 have played an enormous role in the development of the
island
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 territory’s infrastructure.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
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