The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented diagram shows the layout of a public library 20 years ago compared with the current condition.
Overall
, the size of the library is the same. New facilities were added and some areas were removed Linking Words
due to
the renovation. The number of rooms increased from 3 rooms to 4 rooms.
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First,
round tables and chairs placed in the middle of the hallway were eliminated. Linking Words
Second,
the enquiry desks were turned into a café. The self-service machines and the information desk were installed nearby. Linking Words
In addition
, the reading Linking Words
room
where there were newspapers and magazines was changed to a computer Use synonyms
room
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the storytelling events venue was organised in the children’s fiction books Linking Words
room
and there were two sofas provided for the participants. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the adult fiction books section located on the left side of the hallway was substituted by all reference Linking Words
book shelves
. Correct your spelling
bookshelves
Finally
, the new lecture Linking Words
room
replaced the children’s books Use synonyms
room
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
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