The bar chart below shows the population aged 65 and over of three countries in 1980 and 2000 and prediction in 2030
The bar chart illustrates the comparative proportions of the
population
aged 65 or more in three different countries in 1980 and 2000 and also
includes a projection for the year 2030.
Overall
, Germany had more population
aged 65 or over than Canada
and The UK
in 1980 and 2000 and is predicted to remain the oldest country until 2030. Furthermore
, it is anticipated that the figure for those aged 65 or more in Canada
surpass that of the UK
until 2030.
In 1980, 15% of the population
in Germany was 65 or older, as compared to 14% of those aged 65 and older in The UK
. Moreover
, in Canada
, people 65 years old or more
formed just 10% of the whole Correct word choice
older
population
in the same year.
Twenty years later, the percentage of German people aged 65 or more rose to 20%. In addition
, the percentages for this
age group became equal in Canada
and The UK
at 15% of the total population
, showing a more dramatic increase in Canada
.
In 2030, it is forecasted that the share of those aged 65 or over in Germany will reach a peak of 25% and remain the oldest of the three countries. Moreover
, the prediction depicts that more than 20% of Canadians will be 65 or older by 2030, overtaking The UK
with about 18% of people aged 65 or over.Submitted by hesam.kord.f on
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