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The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005

The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005
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The graph presents
visitor
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numbers
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 to three museums in New York, Tokyo, and China from 2000 to 2005. In New York,
visitor
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numbers
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 fluctuated over the period. Starting at 12
million
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 in 2000, the count dropped sharply to 6
million
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 in both 2001 and 2002, before rising again to 7.5
million
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 in 2003. By 2004, visitors returned to 12
million
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, and there was a significant increase to 14
million
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 in 2005. Tokyo’s museum saw a different trend.
Visitor
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numbers
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 were stable at 13.5
million
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 in 2000 and 2001 but dropped to 9.5
million
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 in 2002. The decline continued until 2003, reaching 6
million
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. There was a slight recovery in 2004 to 8
million
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 and a modest increase to 10
million
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 by 2005.
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, China experienced consistent growth in
visitor
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numbers
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 throughout the period. Starting at 6
million
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 in 2000, the figure rose steadily each year, reaching 8
million
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 in 2001, 9.5
million
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 in 2002, 11
million
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 in 2003, and 11.5
million
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 in 2004, before jumping to 16
million
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 in 2005.
Overall
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,
while
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 New York’s museum had fluctuations with a notable recovery, Tokyo’s saw a decline
overall
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, and China showed a steady increase in
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numbers
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, culminating in the highest total by 2005.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitor, numbers, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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