Some people think that watching sports in one's free time is just waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It
is often argue
that preferring to use the Change the verb form
is often argued
lesiure
Correct your spelling
leisure
time
for watching the games is considered as a waste . This
esaay
will depict the points for Correct your spelling
essay
spengind
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spending
time
over watching the sports activities is beneficial.
To begin
with , nowadays the
teenagers love to watch different types of Correct article usage
apply
the
sports activities that include cricket, basketball, football, badminton and many more. Looking for Correct article usage
apply
the
outdoor activities motivates the individual to play the sports in which they are interested. It Correct article usage
apply
also
help
to relieve Change the verb form
helps
a
stress related to business and studies. Remove the article
apply
Moreover
, it can cheer up the mind of the person and get to know how hardly
the sportsman Change the word
hard
try
to win the match . Change the verb form
tries
This
leave
the sign of passion, confidence and goal oriented that can help an individual to develop these skills. Change the verb form
leaves
In addition
to this
, it can avoid
youngster to not drag them into the negative habits of being Verb problem
help
alcholic
, Correct your spelling
alcoholic
smoking
in their Correct word choice
and smoking
lesuire
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leisure
time
.
In addition
to this
, lots of people follow their stars and want to be like them successful
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, successful
person
. to be at their place, they want to know how hardy they have Fix the agreement mistake
people
struggle
or are struggling to be a Change the verb form
struggled
well known
person. Add a hyphen
well-known
For example
, Sachin tandulkar
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Tandulkar
is
awarded as the best player Wrong verb form
was
of
the football match at the international level and Change preposition
in
have
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has
gain
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gained
lot
of popularity by working Correct article usage
a lot
over
his own dreams. Lots of Change preposition
on
youngster
have become his fan Change to a plural noun
youngsters
follwer
and have Correct your spelling
follower
followers
put
a great impact Verb problem
had
over
the young Change preposition
on
bloods
. Change the wording
blood
types of blood
drops of blood
However
, it also
implement
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implements
the
healthy lifestyle for Correct article usage
a
the
normal Correct article usage
apply
individual
when they observe the players and Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
also
assist
in developing the distance from the modern gadgets to which people are getting addicted in their Correct subject-verb agreement
assists
lesuire
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leisure
time
.
In conclusion, spending time
for
watching Change preposition
apply
the
games is beneficial for any age group as it Correct article usage
apply
assist
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assists
more
Change preposition
in more
over
Change preposition
with
the
physical activity and fitness.Correct article usage
apply
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