The charts below show that percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show that percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients  may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
pies
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charts give information on how much
nutirients
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nutrients
an average American resident is supplemented through three meals and
snacks
. To be more precise, the nutrients are Sodium, Saturated fat,
Added
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and Added
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Sugar, shown in
percentage
.
Overall
,
breakfast
is the healthiest meal comparatively as it supplies the smallest amount of each food
additivies
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additives
additive
. People
cosume
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consume
Sodium and Saturated fat mostly during
in
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dinner
and in
snacks
whereas
the highest Added Sugar
consumptionis
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consumption is
consumption
in
snacks
. Looking into details in each
nutrients
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nutrient
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. Sodium is highly consumed in
dinner
at 43% followed by the consumption in lunch at 29%. The
percentage
is identical
of
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how much it is
comsumed
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consumed
in
snacks
and
breakfast
at 14%. Saturated fat follows
the
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a
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similar pattern. The
percentage
from large to small is of
dinner
, lunch, snack and
breakfast
, at 37%, 26%, 21% and 16% respectively.
Difference
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The difference
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is shown in the Added Sugar figures.
Snacks
provide 42% of the whole quantity which almost doubled
dinner
in the second place, followed by lunch and
breakfast
, at a similar
percantage
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percentage
of 19% and 16%
percentage
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words snacks, percentage, breakfast, dinner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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