It
is widely claimChange the verb form
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that the use of social
media
sites will
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the Correct article usage
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offline contact for several
people
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nowadays. The reasons why I believe social
media
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a positive impactsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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towardChange preposition
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society will be elaborated on in
this
essay.
To begin
with, it may
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sensible for some to claim that
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there
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many benefits regards with socializing through online platforms.
First,
it connects
people
from a remote area with
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real-time communication. Take
long distantCorrect your spelling
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coupleFix the agreement mistake
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,
For example
; the couple using these network sites
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them to maintain their relationship, especially connection. Despite long
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and different time
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, they still keep in touch with their
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easily.
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of
this
idea might
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that
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of human social contact tools may bring about maleficent effects.
Therefore
, in
this
respect, there is
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evident provingReplace the word
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that
people
addicted to these applications
more Correct quantifier usage
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which
resultCorrect subject-verb agreement
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in building up negative habits
toChange preposition
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their health. Addiction
ofChange preposition
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social
media
use
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several
people
to Change the verb form
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spend time
scrollWrong verb form
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down on their
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unproductively which
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them
to stayingWrong verb form
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up late and
causing Verb problem
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eye-strained.
However
, I rather argue in favor of its positive side seeing that it
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people
and
it Correct pronoun usage
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will never replace
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face-to-face communication.
To simplyChange preposition
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explain,
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through texts will never
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enough for us.
For instance
, online dating is often not the first choice for many women unlike contacting offline as we can see the reaction and
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the tone we speak.
That is
why we generally like to meet
people
offline rather than texting.
In conclusion,
although
it is undeniable that social
media
can be
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and affect physical health, I am of the opinion that the benefits of social
media
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detrimental outcomes.