The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.
The following bar graph provides information on the
number
of
households
in the US grouped by their annual
income
in the course of year on 2007, 2011, and 2015. A cursory look at the graph shows that the
number
of
households
experienced a slight increase over these years
while
their share on grouping by annual
income
had no change. In 2007,
families
with an annual
income
of more than 100000$ had the biggest share with nearly 30
million
families
. After that, the
number
of
families
with less than 25000$ in annual
income
and the
number
of
families
with 25000$ up to 49999$ in annual
income
had nearly the same population and both of them approximately has 25
million
. The
households
with annual
income
between 50000$ and 74999$ stood in the next place and included 20
million
families
. In the
last
position, the
households
with annual
income
between 75000$ and 99999$ stood with nearly 15
million
families
. These situations had small changes in 2011 and 2015. Only the
number
of
households
with an annual
income
of more than 100000$ had a decreasing trend in 2011 in comparison with
households
with an annual
income
of less than 50000$ , but they came back in the first position again in 2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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