The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The presented graph provides information on the rate of foreigners who visited three regions of European countries in the period between 1987 and 2007.The units are written in thousands. As an
overall
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trend,the most visited areas were the coast and the lakes,
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,the least visited parts were the mountains. To commence with the first tourist attractions , tourism in coastal parts began from 40thousand in 1987 ,
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, a bit of fluctuation took place but sharply surged to over 70 thousand by 2007.
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, in terms of the lakes,exploration started at 10 in 1987 and it boosted up to 40 in 1997,
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, reached
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peak in 2002 (above 70) ,but suddenly dropped to 50 in 2007. At the same time, travelling to mountainous areas commenced from 20 in 1987,
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slightly increased to 30 thousand and above 30 in 2002 and 2007 respectively.Eventually, the highest estimated rate wents to seasides and the lowest belonged to highlands and reservoirs.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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