Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

It is a well-established fact that a lot of animal

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are nearly extinct and the rest of them

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approaching the same risk, too. The cause of

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is largely related to human activities and behaviour, and

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, the best solution for

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problem would be changing human habits.

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essay will look at the main reasons for the loss of wildlife and propose some possible ways of resolving them. The chief

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the problem is deforestation. The empirical evidence supporting

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the articles published by

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a huge part of rainforests are now gone. The best solution for

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would probably be prohibiting the companies

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down forests and

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the amount of tax that those companies pay,

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animals to live in their natural habitat without any disruptions. Another striking problem is global warming. The ice caps are melting and

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a lot of animals lose their home,

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, they go extinct or their number is decreasing day by day. In order to tackle

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issue people need to take care of the environment more, and especially do not use products that release

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much greenhouse gas emissions. By

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conclusion, taking into account all the above-mentioned reasons, I personally subscribe to the idea that

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the main

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why animals are going extinct and lose their habitat, that's why, the best way to tackle these issues would be changing human behaviour and habits.