The charts below show that percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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diagram representsCorrect article usage
the
precentage
of unhealthy Correct your spelling
percentage
foods
that are consumed by people in the USA.
As shown, consuming saturated fat at dinner represented 37% and eating salty foods
was 43% which is higher than the consumption of fatty foods
. While
part take of added sugar
was the least up to 23%.
Whereas
, there's not much difference between percentages in the lunch. Sodium was 29% , fatty foods
were up to 26% and added sugar
was 19%. Besides
, breakfast that contained saturated fat and added sugar
was 16% respectively. While
the foods
that are rich in sodium were 14%.
Moreover
, the percentage of snacks with added sugar
were
up to 42% Change the verb form
was
while
salty snacks were 14% and 21% percentage of snacks containing saturated fats.Submitted by afnan.sa1992 on
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