The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Both diagrammatic representations illustrate an ait, before and after the developmental process of illustrating a new site for tourism.
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, authorities had been dedicated to protecting the landscape and the nature of the Isle. Because coconut trees on the island and the seashore survive according to
their natural aspects in both maps. Whereas
, facilitators constructed attractively and circularly arranged two accommodation clusters near the beach, which is situated on the North-western side and the centre of the island next to the reception hall. Also
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shown in the second graph by the beach.
Additionally
, they had developed a pier at the Southern Ocean and a vehicle tract starting at the pier and boosting around the reception building until the restaurant was designed near the Northern coastal area. As well as
, a boat service in the Southern sea on behalf of the increasing tourist attractions.Submitted by amalitharangani0Most of villagers are changing their accommodations from villages to cities all around the world. As a result of this countryside residents are lower than town areas.I think this is a negative development and in this essay, I will elaborate my perspectives furthermore.
According to this situation, my take on this is, different of the facilities between the town and the village. As an example, there are lots of shopping centres in the city such as house- hold items, clothes, stationeries, vehicles and so on. Conversely, developed educational centres, schools, hospitals with enough facilities are also at the urban areas. Nevertheless, there are lots of companies and unlimited job opportunities in the city area. Also, mostly there are continuous electricity, gas,water and well planned and punctual transport system as well. So people prefer to live in comfortably and moving to cities as they possible.
Additionally, villagers and town people's have same basic need. Such as food, accommodation, education, good health and freedom as well. In some countries there is unavailable electricity in the countryside. Also, there is poor transport system, teachers and facilities at village schools. Moreover, sometimes not enough medications and human resources. So countryside people preferred to move to town. Finally, countryside population decreased and urbanisation in cities.
In a nutshell, if there is as usual same facilities all over the city and rural areas,as there is lots of freedom in the countryside . My point of view is around the world this point is most prominent in developing countries.
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