The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
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The maps depict the contrast between the
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before and after a significant development project was carried out to increase tourism. On the whole, the
island
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has been embellished with a number of resorts and planned communication routes,
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to tourism-centric amenities like swimming and restaurants. Prior to the construction of the pier on the south side, the
island
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's sole features were a few trees and a designated section of beach.
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, at the
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's entrance, a welcome centre is currently established. In order to make it simple for visitors to access the restaurant, it was erected close to the front desk and lodging. Most notably, several housing accommodations were installed without causing any tree damage. The beach to the extreme west has been approved for swimming,
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the east portion of the
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appears to have remained unaffected. Visitors can now access the beach and their accommodations with ease thanks to the construction of footpaths. The reception area has been surrounded by a network of roads for automobiles, enabling guests to drive themselves to the restaurants.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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