You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town/city. You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Explain who you are Describe your complaint Say what you think should be done about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the quality of some regular products that I have been buying at your supermarket. I am your regular and loyal customer who has always been satisfied with the products in your shop. Unfortunately, I started noticing that the vegetables and fruits which I usually buy are no longer fresh. What is more, they seem to have pesticides because I started noticing rashes and blemishes on my skin. I went to the doctor for a consultation and I have been informed that it is

due to

the contaminated foods. In order to avoid more complaints and losing customers I would suggest changing the supplier and checking the products with the food and veterinary inspection.

This

might help you to ensure the quality of food and satisfied customers. I hope you will manage to take my letter into consideration. Yours faithfully, Meja

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Consider expanding on the issue slightly more, perhaps by specifying the time frame over which you've noticed the problem.

logical flow

Ensure a logical flow of ideas by linking the problems directly with the suggested actions for a clearer transition.

greeting and closing

Your letter has a clear and appropriate greeting and closing, maintaining a formal tone throughout.

complete response

You've successfully conveyed a complete response by identifying who you are, the problem, and the solution.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

148 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

regular customer
supermarket
products/merchandise
encountered a problem/issue
expired products
damaged packaging
defective items
batch number
dissatisfaction
inconvenience
quality control
stock rotation
compensation
affected customers
implementing
stricter controls
address the issue

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