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The charts show the amount of oil production by eight countries in 2014 and 2080.

The charts show the amount of oil production by eight countries in 2014 and 2080.
The given visual illustrates the number of oil production by 8 countries in 2014 and 2008. the
amount
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 of oil production (op) in 2014 by approximately 75% for three countries which were Russia Saudi Arabia and The US
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 it is expected to be almost 60 %. The most
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OP in 2014 respectively Russia by one quarter, Saudi Arabia at 22% The US at 20 per cent after that, China at 95% Canada at 85% Iranby 7% Iraq at 5% and
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 the UAE with 4% It is expected that
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amount
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change
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 in 2080 by
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order
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 Saudi Arabia by 28 % means that will
change
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 by almost 5 % and Russia by 25% with a proximity 15
percent
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per cent
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change
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 in future. The UAE with the biggest shift will increase by 4% to 26%
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; Canada will decrease by almost 0.5
percent
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Iran will decrease by less than 5 %
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 the
amount
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 of The US has no
change
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 and stood at 20% in 2014 and
this
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amount
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 will be the same in 2080. These pie charts showed the difference between OP in 2008 and 2010
included
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decrease
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a decrease
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and
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an
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 increase and no
change
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, change with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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