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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012
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The provided line graph illustrates changes
about
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in
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 how much
coffee
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exported
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was exported
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 from three different American countries over a decade. It can be clearly seen that
,
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there was an upward trend
for
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in
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 the
amount
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 of
coffee
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which was
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that
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come
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came
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 out from Brazil and Costa Rica.
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However
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 Colombia faced a rapid change over the period. In 2002,the average of
coffee
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 which was sent out from Brazil was almost 11
kilograms
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.
Following
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this
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 it experienced a moderate climb and peaked at 25
kilograms
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 in 2012.(Which was the highest
amount
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 over the period).surprisingly the
amount
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 of
coffee
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existed
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that existed
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from
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in
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 Costa Rica saw a modest
declie
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decline
 between 2002 and 2006.After
which
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this
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,
this
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 product had a slight increase and reached
to
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20
kilograms
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 in 2012. As regards how much
coffee
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 was exported from Colombia,It
initiated
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began
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 at 5
kilograms
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 in 2002.For the next four
years
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years,
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 the porporation of
coffee
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 had a gradual climb and
then
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 hit the bottom to approximately 3
kilograms
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 in 2008.(Which was the least
amount
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 over the whole year).For the following
of
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trend,It reached
to
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15
kilograms
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 in 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, amount, kilograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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