The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in

one UK city between 1989 and 2009.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart provides the
number
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of careers in
tourism related
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tourism-related
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industries in
one
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the UK in the years 1989 to 2009 .
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, the chart illustrated the figures
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for serval
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serval
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jobs between restaurants ,
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hotels
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hotel
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hotels
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,
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sports
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sport
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sports
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and leisure and travel and tour
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in
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apply
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apply
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the
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during just one decade.
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in 2004 the
rate's
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the
restaurant
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restaurants
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made up the highest
number
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while
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in 2009
figure's
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figures's
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travel and
tour
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tours
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was
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were
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the lowest
number
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in the chart Now Turing back to details , in 1980 the tread's restaurant show under 1200 after that go to an
icraese
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increase
increased
gradually to reached to peak
number
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to made up1600 in 2004
then
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decreased to reached under 1400 in the year 2009. On
other
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the other
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hand
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the
number
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of
sport
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sports
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and leisure is fluctuating
in
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apply
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the
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apply
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during of
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the period
1980
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from 1980
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until 2009. In 1980 , the figure's travel and
toure
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tour
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started upward to reach
peak
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a peak
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rate in 1994 after which
bagun
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begun
to
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decreased
decrease
sdecreased
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decrease
gradually to
acounted
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accounted
to the lower
number
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in the year 2009
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • significant increase
  • moderate rise
  • sharp fall
  • peak
  • trough
  • stagnant
  • sector
  • tourism-related industries
  • employment figures
  • data
  • time period
  • comparison
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