The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart gives information about the expenditures of five main categories in the United States, Canada, United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
Overall
, the figure for the housing category
was the most popular, while
the proportion of the health
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healthcare
care
category
accounted for the lowest expenditure in some countries in 2009.
Moving to a detailed analysis, the proportion of food
and transportation
sectors was responsible for around 15% in the United States. Housing had the highest category
, it was above 20 per cent
, which was the biggest indicator here. The health
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healthcare
care
and clothing sector were
responsible for almost 5 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
percent
of the United States. Change the spelling
per cent
Food
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The food
category
was responsible for 15 per cent
of Canada this
year. Next,
the percentage of housing and transportation
was similar in Canada with 20%. Here, health
care
and clothing categories form around 5%.
On the other hand
, the amount of expenditure for food
and housing factor was over 20% in United
Kingdom. Correct article usage
the United
Then
transportation
experienced 15% in there in 2009. The expenditure on health
care
was below 5%, which was the lowest figure. The rate of clothing is over 5 per cent
a little in United
Kingdom. Correct article usage
the United
Food
and housing categories were similar values at 23% approximately in Japan. In there, the proportion of transportation
consists of 10%. The indicator of health
care
and clothing sectors was about 5 per cent
in the year 2009 in Japan.Submitted by quluzadenurlan107 on
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