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The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
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The bar chart gives information about the expenditures of five main categories in the United States, Canada, United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
Overall
, the figure for the housing
category
 was the most popular,
while
 the proportion of the
health
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healthcare
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care
category
 accounted for the lowest expenditure in some countries in 2009. Moving to a detailed analysis, the proportion of
food
 and
transportation
 sectors was responsible for around 15% in the United States. Housing had the highest
category
, it was above 20 per
cent
, which was the biggest indicator here. The
health
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healthcare
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care
 and clothing sector
were
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was
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 responsible for almost 5
percent
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per cent
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 of the United States.
Food
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The food
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category
 was responsible for 15 per
cent
 of Canada
this
 year.
Next,
the percentage of housing and
transportation
 was similar in Canada with 20%. Here,
health
care
 and clothing categories form around 5%.
On the other hand
, the amount of expenditure for
food
 and housing factor was over 20% in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom.
Then
transportation
 experienced 15% in there in 2009. The expenditure on
health
care
 was below 5%, which was the lowest figure. The rate of clothing is over 5 per
cent
 a little in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom.
Food
 and housing categories were similar values at 23% approximately in Japan. In there, the proportion of
transportation
 consists of 10%. The indicator of
health
care
 and clothing sectors was about 5 per
cent
 in the year 2009 in Japan.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words category, health, care, food, transportation, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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