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The charts below show that percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show that percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the approximate number of nutrients per person each day in the United States.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
sodium
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 and saturated fats were added in large portions to the dinner meals,
while
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snacks
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 contain the highest percentage of
sugar
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. Apparently, there are a lot of people
have
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who have
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 health issues associated with a big consumption of
sodium
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 and saturated fat.
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 with,
sugar
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 made
19
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up 19
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% of dinner composition,
whereas
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 the amount
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sodium
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of sodium
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 and saturated fats accounted for 43% and 37% per person respectively. 14% of
snacks
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 and breakfasts were sourced with
sodium
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, and almost 30% of lunches included
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this additives
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this additive
these additives
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.
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, 26% of
luchs
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such
 was saturated fats, with 21% and 16% of it in
snacks
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 and breakfasts respectively.
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Regarding
 the added
sugar
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 chart, in terms of the biggest consistency of harmful chemicals,
snacks
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 accounted for 42%,
while
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 only 16% of breakfast dishes contain
sugar
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.
In addition
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, dinners with added
sugar
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were not rarely
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were rarely
were not
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 consumed by
the
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apply
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US citizens, it made
almost
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up almost
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 a fifth of the chart.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, snacks, sugar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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