The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the difference
of
households with electrical appliances and Change preposition
between
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
hours
of housework per week from 1920 to 2019.
There is a gradual trend in the percentage of households with electrical appliances, however
, the other chart
has a decreasing trend. An interesting thing is that in the first chart
, two categories achieve 100% in the end. Furthermore
, as long as the second chart
statred
to Correct your spelling
started
fell
the first Wrong verb form
fall
chart
began to rose
.
Refrigerator quickly rose to 90% in 1960, before that it was at the bottom of the Wrong verb form
rise
chart
in 1920,
and it stayed at 100% from 1960 to 2019. While
vacuum cleaners also
stayed at 100% in 2000 and 2019, it gradually grew from 30% in
the beginning of Change the preposition
at
this
period. However
, washing machines kept a steady growth in this
period, it started at 40% and increased to just above 70% in 2019.
In the beginning, people spend
50 Wrong verb form
spent
hours
per week doing housework, and then
sharply drop
to 20 Wrong verb form
dropped
hours
in 1960. After that, it slowly decrease
to 10 Change the verb form
decreases
hours
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
this
period.Submitted by yushin20020625 on
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