Some people argue that if children behave badly, their parents should accept responsibility and also be punished for the behavior of their children. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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that people say parents must

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children and

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their own. I strongly agree with the topic which said a child should be punished once they are badly in

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performing

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themselves

performance.

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badly

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behaviour

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the result later.

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been showing and performing badly in

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public, they should be

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for paying

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that

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example. ; In summary, in my

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parents taking

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responsibility

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for their own child

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