The chart below shows the total number of hours per month from 1980 to 2015 that people in the USA used modern technology divided into four categories.

The chart below shows the total number of hours per month from 1980 to 2015 that people in the USA used modern technology divided into four categories.
The bar graphs illustrate the total number of
hours
per month of modern technology used in the USA from 1980 to 2015. It is noticeable that the radio was the most popular technological device in America from 1980 to 2000. Particularly, the
use
of radio reached a peak at over 350
hours
in 1990,
then
this
figure plummeted to less than 100
hours
in 2015.
Conversely
, the
use
of television increased consistently from less than 50
hours
at the beginning of the period to around 200
hours
in 2010, but
this
figure slightly decreased in 2015. It is
also
interesting that smartphones started to be used in 2000.
This
figure skyrocketed from 55
hours
in 2000 to 350
hours
in 2015. The
use
of computers was roughly equal to the
use
of smartphones in 2015. Remarkably, the
use
of computers doubled from 150
hours
in 2000 to 300
hours
in 2005.
Overall
,
while
the radio was popular in an earlier era, computers and smartphones became the most popular technological devices after the 2000s.
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