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The line graph below shows the global popularity of five different sports from 1990 to 2020.

The line graph below shows the global popularity of five different sports from 1990 to 2020.
#line #popularity #five #sports
The line graph illustrates the average of trips in miles in six
differents
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different
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type
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types
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 of sports which the age
of
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5 to 15
years
 old between
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the year
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year
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years
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 1990 to 2020 in
United
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the United
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State Of
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States of
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 America.
Overall
,
from
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the data
that
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give
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an information
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information
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 which is from the beginning.
In addition
, bus and car were increasing meanwhile car was decreased.
However
, walking and
train were
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training
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 fluctuated
as well as
 walking
being
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decreased and
slighty
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slightly
 increased since 2000.
On the other
hand
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 cycling was absolutely
tuouch
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touch
 down in 2020. From the beginning,
in
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the age of 5 to 15
years
 old
were
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taking the bus
is
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was
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increasing
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increased
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 to the top in
a
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the
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year
of
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2020, taking
by
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my
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 car
was
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increased in the
startting
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starting
 time but was falling down since
a
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the
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year
 of 2000 to 2020.
However
, people who are taking by
trains
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train
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 was a huge fluctuated, it is been up and down in every 10
years
,
taxi
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 has been up and down in 40
years
then
 increased again in
a
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the
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year
 of 2010.
Furthermore
, cycling
of
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was the same spot at the beginning
same
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as
bus
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the bus
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taken
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, but it was absolutely down and down
in
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every 10
years
service
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of service
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, walking
seem
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seemed
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 like taking down from the starting but
was rise
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rose
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 up from
a
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the
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year
 of 2010
Submitted by Chaiyapat Soka on

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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