The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
The bar graph illustrates the quantity of power that had been produced by windmills in India, Denmark, Germany, and the United States between 1985 and 2000.
Overall
, most of the countries increasingly generated energy year by year, except one country that faced a downfall in the two Linking Words
last
periods. Linking Words
Moreover
, there are two nations that succeeded in gaining more than 6 times more power in 2000 than they had at the beginning of the interval.
Based on the statistics, India, Denmark, and Germany had rapidly grown in energy supply for more than a decade, which started at less than 400 megawatts in 1985 and finished at more than 800 megawatts in 1995. Linking Words
On the other hand
, despite being the best producer in 1985 with 1200, the United States failed to preserve its title and was in the second rank in 2000, right after Germany, which Linking Words
finally
dominated. Linking Words
Furthermore
, India and Denmark were the two producers that skyrocketed up to six times from their initial production.Linking Words
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